Still walking. Still writing. I've been here for a long time. I've seen shimmers of light that disappeared. Gotta adjust the backpack and keep walking.
When it's not getting traction, time to switch. Change the focus. Change the style. Change the pitch. I revised my query a few days ago and have sent it out to nine agents. Here is the new one line summary:
Four underestimated kids must choose sides and try not to destroy their future when they sneak into a chaotic cyber battle of a secret war that could decimate civilization.
New title: From the Shadows
The rest of the query is focused more on the characters, less on the plot. Now wait for the next glimmer in the distance...
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